Also, how long does BookofHolsety usually take to read the comments he gets? I looked over his script for the Narration segment for the Prologue, and thought it suffered from way too much Passive Voice, so I rewrote the whole thing so that it read in the Active Voice instead.

I did that about 11 days ago but...he never got back to me. Is he taking a bit of a break from the project? It's ok if he does, I just want to know before I do any more revisions, you know?